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You really need to learn when to shut the fuck up.

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"I didn't ask for any of it. I didn't mean to do anything. I just heard Kakaya's scream, and when I came down, Mullin was crying over something, a big chunk of his leg missing.

Mullin doesn't cry.

I approached him, and there she was...laying there, and I never even had time to acknowledge the fact I would never see her smiling again, never hear her voice...

I wish I had time to think before the words started tumbling out of my mouth. A wonderful talent of mine.

I asked what the fuck happened, why is his leg like that, what happened to Kakaya's lusus...he interrupted me, standing up and turning toward me, blackish red blood covering his cheek, chest, and dripping own his leg, with the most evil glare in his eyes.

"Ya know, Swikes," he starts, "you really need to learn when to shut the fuck up."

And so he dug his nails into my neck, and did it for me.

Permantly."


soooo i've been wanting to draw this for awhile.

in case you don't know, this is right after Kakaya (Mullin's matesprit) and Mullin's lusus died, and he got his leg almost bitten off.

i must say, i'm really proud of this. took me the better part of three hours, too.

hope you like and shit.
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Neon-The-Wolf-Scythe's avatar
:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Overall
:star::star::star::star-empty::star-empty: Vision
:star::star::star::star::star: Originality
:star::star::star-half::star-empty::star-empty: Technique
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Impact

I have to say...

This shows great improvement!

But,to get the negatives over with...
I think that the anatomy is slightly off,the legs and arms need a little more 'form' and 'angle' to them.Also,maybe a little more 'looseness' in the arm falling away from Mullin.
Now,the neck on Mullin needs to be just ever so slightly taller,but I like how you captured the fact his neck was lowering. And last for this,I think Mullin's hand needs to grip all the way around the neck,but I'm not perfect with anatomy either,so I may be wrong.

Now,the positives~!
For some reason,I just love the way you did Mullin's legs. I think it may be just the pose they're in,they capture a sense of violence I suppose.
And the faces...I love the style,especially Mullin's face.

Overall,this picture gave the violent message I think you were trying to get,keep it going!